Colours?

Photo credit to – Indy Kethdy

Modified to  5-7-5 syllables rule

Lovely fall  colours,

exclaimed mom, “I don’t get mom”,

said her blind sonny!

 

Earlier version : 5-7-5 word (got confused)

Beautiful autumn fall colours everywhere,
exclaimed the mother, “I don’t understand mommy”,
said her blind little son!

Written For :  Trifextra Challenge

Prompt: This weekend we’re asking you to harken back to your grade school days and write a haiku.  No word restrictions, just stick to the structure as defined below.

HAIKU (noun) : an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively.

Further reading:

Examples of Haiku – http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-haiku-poems.html

Syllable : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Syllable

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