Modified to 5-7-5 syllables rule
Lovely fall colours,
exclaimed mom, “I don’t get mom”,
said her blind sonny!
Earlier version : 5-7-5 word (got confused)
Beautiful autumn fall colours everywhere,
exclaimed the mother, “I don’t understand mommy”,
said her blind little son!
Written For : Trifextra Challenge
Prompt: This weekend we’re asking you to harken back to your grade school days and write a haiku. No word restrictions, just stick to the structure as defined below.
HAIKU (noun) : an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively.
Further reading:
Examples of Haiku – http://examples.yourdictionary.com/examples-of-haiku-poems.html
Syllable : http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Syllable
Touching one!
thank you
I love fall colors…I couldn’t imagine not being able to see them!
yeah me too, thanks for reading 🙂