She dances in the rain,
Her heart filled with gaiety,
Clad in white, sometimes green,
Gracefully changing her beauty.
Time has no meaning,
She is forever revealing,
Swinging and Swaying,
Joyous soul floating!
Trifextra 33 word Challenge: Soul-soaring happiness
Note the progression of light and seasons. Take some time to ponder the rebirth and resurgence and ultimate triumph that is nature and growth and light. Think about time and the sun and the movement of both. Fill yourself up with it, and then write. No creepiness allowed. No girls in chains. No basements. No flesh-eating viruses. No post-apocalyptic hunger pangs. No dead philandering boyfriends. Nobody pulling the plug on Grandma partially because she’s old but mostly because she deserves it. We want soul-soaring happiness out of you this week. If that isn’t your thing, just give it a whirl. If it really isn’t your thing, come back for the next challenge when the rules are guaranteed to be different. Because that’s also the kind of challenge we are. – See more at: http://www.trifectawritingchallenge.com/2013/08/trifextra-week-eighty-one.html#sthash.fN51DdlS.dpuf
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Beautiful
Thank you very much 🙂
My pleasure
This made me smile – nature is beautiful no matter what she wears 🙂
So nice to hear that 🙂 Indeed she is!!!
Beautiful words, Dhriti 🙂 great entry!
Thank you so much ‘theinnerzone’ 🙂
Dhriti, This was joyous and beautiful to read! I loved it!
Thanks for your kind words Valerie. I am feeling joyous each time I see a comment like this 🙂
“Joyous soul floating”
LOVE this! You have crafted a beautiful piece. The words convey movement, rebirth. Nice job with the prompt!
Thank you very much for the lovely comment
Very nice indeed…
Thanks a lot
How beautiful and delicate!
Thank you very much
There’s a lot of joy in this poem.
Thank you
Each season has it’s own beauty,… lovely
Yes each season is beautiful.. Thank you
Ooo, you captured the intent of the prompt brilliantly. WONDERFUL job!
Thank you Christine 🙂
Awesome.
I like, “Time has no meaning.”
🙂 Thank you
This was awesome! Cool 🙂
hehee thanks Melissa 🙂