Dental Appointment

Here starts again! The drilling session,
Upper wisdom tooth, he yells in tension
Braces embracing all our thirty-one friends,
Wonder how much time here he spends!
God save us, from this fuss!

Trifextra: we’re going a bit weird on you with this weekend’s short prompt.  Trifecta editor Lisa has a son who just lost his first tooth.  In honor of such a creepy event, we want you to write a 33-word response that uses the word tooth.  Your response can use any definition of the word but cannot tell the story of someone losing a tooth.  (Because we just told that story, and it was pretty boring the first time.) –

See more at: Trifextra weekend prompt


18 thoughts on “Dental Appointment

    • Oh dear gum,
      What have you become!
      How you keep mum?
      You say you are numb,
      If tomorrow comes,to pain you succumb,
      You swell like a plum,
      Whole day you are glum!

      33 words, just for fun 🙂

  1. I have more angst when I go the dentist than any other -ist. I just went a few days ago and all the sounds make me want to drink the bottle of Listerine, so I can make it through. Hmmm. Just gave myself an idea.

    • For two days before appointment with dentist let’s not use Listerine, Dentist will cancel appointment for us, what say!! 😉

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